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作者: 浩天流星    时间: 2019-4-19 14:48
标题: 父子缘
本帖最后由 浩天流星 于 2019-4-20 21:17 编辑

我试写的第一篇微小说:

父子缘
文/浩天流星

我伴着母亲阵痛的尾音平安着陆,兴奋的啼鸣引来了父亲急促的脚步声,父道,远道而来的小贵客你让我好等好等。温暖对视、嘘寒问暖,执意把宽厚的双肩矮化成我眺望远方的脚凳。我打量陋室,已有四贵客安寨扎营。我无奈望着父亲刚正不阿的躯干在柴米油盐的挤兑下,佝偻成一张苦命的弯弓,少言寡语的嘴巴里堆满了无处倾倒叹息声。抚摸病榻中的父亲,如窗外那枚被寒风摧残发抖的秃枝枯叶。父亲眼眶噙泪哽咽,我视你为命中贵客,却没能好好款待你……我苦笑无语,暗中攥紧了击碎苦难的拳头。
作者: 浩天流星    时间: 2019-4-20 07:25
第一次尝试,漏洞百出,让您见笑了!
作者: rnwxr    时间: 2019-4-21 07:49
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作者: myfwj    时间: 2019-4-23 04:30

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